Product Descriptions

Etsy Product Rewrites

I have rewritten these etsy product descriptions as i think they can be better to improve search visibility, brand identity and conversion.

Etsy post: Lavender Essential Oil, 100% Pure Natural Therapeutic Grade for Soap, Body, Skin, Hair, Diffuser and Candle Bulk Wholesale - Etsy UK

Original

• Lacks emotional appeal

• Overly technical tone

• Doesn’t highlight benefits

• Lacking keywords for SEO

• Cluttered format

• Doesn’t show why the product is better than others

Rewrite

• Clear and informative

• Emotional and cultural appeal

• Focuses on benefits

• Keywords for SEO